
Would-be writers of the world (and published ones, too), ya’ll need to read this fabulous post by fabulous author Shannon Hale. That’s all I have to say, today, since nothing I could say is as wonderful as her post. Bye, now.

Would-be writers of the world (and published ones, too), ya’ll need to read this fabulous post by fabulous author Shannon Hale. That’s all I have to say, today, since nothing I could say is as wonderful as her post. Bye, now.
I’m over on Bookshop Talk today, sharing my review of Maggie Stiefvater’s unique novel, THE RAVEN BOYS. It’s the first in a series called “The Raven Cycle,” and let me tell you: I’m SO EXCITED for the next book to come out!
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Molly McCarty has been away from her hometown of El Dorado Springs, Missouri for years, but two things about it haven’t changed: Everyone in El Dorado knows everyone else’s business, and business is…quirky. Molly’s old friend, Jerry Ray Turner, is now a cross-dresser—though he’s still the best mechanic in town, even done up in rhinestones and heels. Winthrop Worthington, the town’s (married) playboy is still making eyes at anything in a skirt (except for Jerry), and Ollie Griffin is bathing in the fountain in the park, since there’s no shower inside the 1969 Thunderbird in which he has lived since returning home from Vietnam. Still, not much can surprise Molly—unless it’s the fact that Roy Bob Benson is trying to open a strip club in the old jewelry building, or that the ghost of the teenaged girl who died at Serenity Farm (which Molly and her husband just bought) is still hanging around to do chores.
Though the cast of characters in Kathie Truitt’s second novel (click here to see my review of her debut novel, FALSE VICTIM) is a large one, each character is fully realized and utterly believable. As a native of a small town, I particularly appreciated the manner in which Truitt depicts the loyalty the townspeople feel toward each other, even though they don’t always see eye-to-eye. I also sympathized with the characters who feel as if they are constantly being scrutinized. The problems in this small town are small problems, for the most part, but because people are so connected to each other in El Dorado, everyone feels the weight of everyone else’s burdens—a beautiful idea and one that is true to country living, in my experience.
Characters are certainly the focus of this novel, and one character really stood out to me. Oddly enough, this character is not the main character, but the narrator, whose identity is not revealed until the end of the book (a delightful, reader-hooking tactic!). I also appreciated the solid plot, which moves along at a pace appropriate to a character-driven novel.
Readers who enjoy such classics as L.M. Montgomerey’s “Anne of Green Gables” series, Jan Karon’s “Mitford” books and Mary Ann Shaffer and Annie Barrows’ THE GUERNSEY LITERARY AND POTATO PEEL PIE SOCIETY will surely adore Kathie Truitt’s THE HILLBILLY DEBUTANTE CAFÉ, which, while being a little sassier than the aforementioned books, is quite as charming, heartwarming, and enduring.
*Please note that this is adult fiction of a very clean variety.
The minute the chinook begins to blow, I get the itch to clean. There’s something satisfying about throwing the windows wide open and letting the fresh air whip through my winter-musty home. Stomping the summer’s ripe grapes into juice, Keanu Reeves-style, could be no more magical than stomping the throw rugs clean in a kiddie pool full of soapy water.
And what about all the fun reorganization that comes with deep cleaning? The very thought of shifting the dinner plates to the cup cupboard and the cups to the bowl shelf sends me into raptures…
Where was I? Oh, yes.
The joys of reorganization are not lost on me, a woman who, because of her profession, has been branded by society as a Messy Creature (What is the point of a writer having a room of her own if that room is a filthy jumble, I ask you?). Nor do I believe that all other writers are untidy, by nature. After all, isn’t the act of revising a novel an epic deep clean? But for those of you with one eyebrow quirked in skepticism, let me elucidate by giving you four steps to a successful deep clean—of the home and of the novel.
Step One: The Assessment
Grab a notebook and walk through your house—your novel. Make note of how things are currently organized. Draw a map (Cheryl Klein’s bookmapping exercise, as outlined in her book, Second Sight: An Editor’s Talks on Writing, Revising, and Publishing Books for Children and Young Adults, is invaluable), and mark out spaces with potential.
Step Two: The Plan
Look at your map. Are you organizing in a way that makes logical sense? If you have the camping supplies—adventure!—mixed with the fine china—fairy tale romance!—you had better be prepared to deal with chipped Spode (which can give a teacup a certain amount of devil-may-care charm, I must say). Can any cupboards or closets—characters—serve double-duty? Are others too crammed with unnecessary stuff that simply needs to be discarded? Draw a new map that shows your planned changes.
Step Three: Ready…Set…Go!
Be methodical in your work. Start at your front door—your inciting event—and organize and clean your way through your house until you arrive back at your now-immaculate starting point (Novels with a circular element to them can be so satisfying; but whether your novel is circular in nature or not, your ending should be another “door,” or as beloved children’s writer Richard Peck said, it should “…[end] not with happily ever after, but at a new beginning, with the sense of a lot of life yet to be lived.”). If, in being so systematic, you find you’re burning out, go tackle a room—a scene—that you’ve really been excited about reorganizing. Once you’re done there, and you’re feeling all revved-up, go back to the room you were supposed to hit in the first place. Also bear in mind that while organization is your goal, not everything should be tucked away, out of sight. Make sure you display many of your favorite treasures. Your friends—readers—would much rather see your fine things than hear about them (As the adage goes, “Show, don’t tell.”).
Step Four: Keep the Junk Drawer
Writer William Faulkner is quoted to have said, “In writing, you must kill all your darlings.” I agree. But don’t delete them or throw them away. Keep them in a “junk” file. We know the truth: they’re not really junk. Neither are those oddities you keep in your kitchen junk drawer. Junk files and junk drawers are places to store those things you might need, at some point.
And finally, a tip: Don’t be discouraged if it takes a while to clean things up. You may need to rearrange what you’ve just organized several times before you get to a point where you’re satisfied. Remember that dipping your mitts into the jumble and moving just one item into place is progress. It doesn’t all have to happen at once. And the more you do it, the better at it you will become.
Former Miss Mississippi Julie Patterson knew moving to another state would be difficult, but she never anticipated the horrors she and her family would endure at the hands of a neighbor. At first, Lynn seems to be the friend Julie has always wanted: someone who truly understands how difficult it is to lose a child because she lost two babies of her own. Even when Julie learns that Lynn lied about her losses, she gives Lynn the benefit of the doubt, as she believes a true southern lady would. But then the lies begin to multiply, and Julie learns from others that Lynn has a propensity to lie about everything, often changing her stories in order to appear more pitiable or, at times, even more heroic, than her neighbors. Unfortunately for Julie, Lynn has chosen her as her new favorite target, because Julie fights back. But will Julie’s efforts to protect her family from Lynn be enough?
FALSE VICTIM is based on true events that took place in the life of the author, Kathie Truitt, a former Mrs. Missouri America. Truitt builds her story gradually, but the pacing is excellent and perfectly suited to a contemporary psychological thriller.
Advice to Readers: Read FALSE VICTIM on a weekend! It’s certain you’ll be up all night, engrossed in this shocking tale. And stay tuned for my review of Truitt’s second novel, a humorous tale (Whew! Thank heaven!) called THE HILLBILLY DEBUTANTE CAFE.
*Note: This is Adult Fiction of a clean but spooky variety.
When Amy goes to the Rocky Mountain Restoration Center, a beautiful retreat designed to assist its clients with reaching their weight loss goals by helping them change their lifestyle, she has no idea that the center’s methods are unethical. What could be wrong with horseback riding in the mountains, eating healthy meals, and taking nature walks with new friends? But the center isn’t all it seems, nor is Amy’s stay there. She wakes up one evening, connected to a leaking IV in an unfamiliar room. Upon realizing she is much thinner, she also realizes she can’t remember how she lost the weight. After escaping the center, Amy enlists the help of a shrewd (and handsome) sheriff, who has also been contacted by the center’s doctor—a man who pretends Amy suffered a psychological breakdown and ran away. The careful gathering of clues not only leads Amy and Sheriff Hansen to learn the truth of what is happening at the “Fat Farm,” but leads them to fall in love with each other, too.
As a native of a small Wyoming town south of Jackson Hole (which is the same setting as that of FAT FARM), I found the landscape and characters to be true-to-life while also being unique enough to entertain readers who are not from that area. While ethics in medicine was a central theme of this story, I appreciated that the examination of what is right and what is wrong did not lead to sordid writing. I also enjoyed the pacing of the book, which was slow enough to allow the romance between Amy and Sheriff Hansen to build naturally, and fast enough to make this book a true page-turner of a mystery. Indeed, the novel is the sort that can be read in one relaxed sitting.
Readers who appreciate wholesome writing, a thought-provoking mystery, and a healthy dose of romance will surely enjoy FAT FARM.
*Note: Since I generally review children’s fiction, I want to be sure to state that this is Adult Fiction.
My dear friend, talented writer Sharon Himsl, tagged me in The Next Big Thing Blog Hop, and I am so excited to talk about one of my works-in-progress! Thanks for tagging me, Sharon!
What is the working title of your book?
Quill
Where did the idea come from for the book?
I’ve been fascinated by Mother Goose nursery rhymes since I was a tiny child, and about six years ago, I decided I wanted to write a work of historical fiction about the young woman who became “Mother Goose.” I knew, at the time, that what we commonly think of as the Mother Goose rhymes were actually the works of more than one person, but I didn’t realize, until I started seriously researching the nursery rhymes, just how many people “could have been” Mother Goose. Rhymes are attributed to individuals who lived in many different countries at many different times under many different political structures, and some of the rhymes really have no identifiable origin, since they were a part of oral tradition for centuries at the time someone thought to write them down.
At any rate, I decided that in order to write a book that got at all the interesting politics and people that inspired our real Mother Goose nursery rhymes, I needed to have the freedom to create my own world with my own political and religious structure. However, some of my real-life research was just too fascinating not to include! For example, I learned that some Mother Goose rhymes have been attributed to Charlemagne’s mother, whom some historians refer to as “Bertha the Goosefoot.” When I learned this, my brain exploded with possibilities. I decided to create a young woman with a webbed foot to “star” in my novel. This works perfectly, because Mother Goose is traditionally portrayed as a witch, and hundreds of years ago (not even that long ago, in some places) many people thought that if a person had a physical trait that could be called “animalistic” at all, then that person was more than likely a witch. I love it when things come together for me when I’m writing.
Since my novel is a work of fantasy, I also got to create my own nursery rhymes for the book. I studied various rhyme structures and modeled my verses after those from tradition (for the most part).
What genre does your book fall under?
Fantasy
What actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition?
Ooo…this is fun. But before I drop names and show you photos, let me explain that all of the actors that I have chosen as “face inspiration” for my characters are actually too old to play my characters in a movie rendition (for the most part). However, they look, to some degree, how I imagine my characters to look.
This is my main character, Quilla (Quill): Felicity Jones. I wanted someone with dark eyes, but Ms. Jones’s are blue, I think. She is lovely, but she is also unique-looking, and I imagine Quill to be both of those things.
Quill’s brother, Pendry (Pen): Ben Whishaw
Quill’s and Pen’s guardian, Scribe Henry Black; also Henry’s brother, Max: Ioan Gruffud.
Cleric Hollywell: Patrick Stewart
Cleric Locke: Michael Wincott
Vestor Marchant: Eddie Redmayne
I’ve got a large cast of characters in my book, but that’s enough photos of people, I think!
But before we quit entirely with the photos, here’s one more that inspires me when I think of my setting of “Heath Gate Temple” (This is actually Khao Luang Cave Temple in Thailand, as photographed by Craig Ferguson):

Gorgeous, right?
What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?
When seventeen-year-old Quilla Black–a ward of Heath Gate Temple who is ostracized by her community because she has a webbed foot–learns that her life is in danger and that her only hope for surviving the impending witch hunts rests in the hands of a rebel political group, she offers to help the rebels in their efforts to band together by inserting coded meeting times and locations into the simple children’s rhymes the king requires her to write. Whew! That’s a loooooooong and convoluted sentence. I’m gonna have to work on that.
Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
I plan to have this book published traditionally.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript?
It took me about a year (total–I took many breaks) to write my first draft, which is vastly different from the draft I’m working on now (which has also taken about a year). I’m a stay-at-home mom, and my children are my priority, so it does take me quite a while to complete a project. However, I know this about myself, and I’m very disciplined, so I don’t even feel like I’m taking “too long.”
What other books would you compare this story to within your genre?
My book is full of political intrigue and has a healthy dose of romance, like Megan Whalen Turner’s “The Queen’s Thief” series; but my book is also about a character who is getting to know and accept herself, like Shannon Hale’s character Rin in FOREST BORN. Like Rae Carson’s THE GIRL OF FIRE AND THORNS and Lena Coakley’s WITCHLANDERS, religion (a made-up one) plays a major role in my story.
What else about your book might pique the reader’s interest?
In my book, the main character, Quill, struggles with her identity. In an effort to understand the world around her and her place within the world, she writes “creation myths” that explain these things. These myths also serve other purposes, such as explaining the religious and political structure of the culture. Because Quill learns more and more about herself and the world throughout the course of the book, she constantly revises her creation myths with this new information. Writing these myths has been the highlight of writing this book. I love the formal language and the scenes such language sets. I also really enjoyed writing my own politically-charged nursery rhymes.
If you’re interested in learning more about creation myths or in reading some for yourself, try Virginia Hamilton’s Newbery award-winning collection, IN THE BEGINNING. It’s remarkable and fascinating, and I love it.
I have tagged writer Alexa Barry, and you can learn more about her and her work-in-progress by clicking on her name (above) sometime after Monday, March 18. Of course, I’d click on her name right away, if I were you, since her website is highly enjoyable, and you’re sure to go back for more, anyway!